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Mustered Clouds

Morning stretch of light, Clouds sliced by blades of pearled rays: Sallow beginnings.

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Date: 3/15/2013 1:05:00 AM

gosh, you must be posting stored up poems you have been writing. they are all much too good to have been written in one day. Or were they??

Raul Moreno
Date: 3/15/2013 2:30:00 AM

They are all new

Date: 3/11/2013 12:23:00 AM

Just beautiful...I ve read your other haiku too..I ll be back to comment later..Duty calls : )

Raul Moreno
Date: 3/15/2013 3:04:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine

Date: 3/9/2013 1:33:00 PM

It's a beautiful sight to see... those blades of light through the clouds. What a way to start the day methinks. Keep up the good work!

Raul Moreno
Date: 3/15/2013 3:04:00 AM

It's always a glorious sight to see, thanks!

Date: 3/9/2013 4:39:00 AM

I like this one very much Raul you paint a good picture here xx

Raul Moreno
Date: 3/15/2013 3:03:00 AM

Thank you Mandy