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Musical Memory

Musical Memory I hear your song Break through silence. Do you sing of freedom? As you fly? A happy tune Coming from the treetops. I look for you In the pines above. When I do, Life’s simplicity Falls gently between The layers of branches. I watch nature Have its own life. Where ominous worry Does not exist. Your music brings me To the other side. So easily missed In the rush of today. Walking with pain, It is easy to get lost. Until your song Awakens me. I greet calm water. Touched by the warmth Of shining sun rays Reaching down on me. When I leave this sanctuary, A musical memory plays on To remind me What life is all about, I see. Heidi Sands

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Date: 10/24/2016 8:21:00 PM
A very lovely poem, Heidi. Such grace and simplicity in its elegance. Very well written and structured. It reminds me of a Terry Callier song, "Ordinary Joe. The lyrics say: I've seen a sparrow get high, and waste his time in the sky. Don't you know he thinks it's easy to fly, he's just a little bit freer than I ... Love your work, lady. Much love from RW.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2016 9:13:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to give the feedback on this. It was a nice moment of life. :)
Date: 10/23/2016 2:27:00 PM
Heavens did you slip into a pile of white powder on accident and write a book last night? There's like 20 wonderful journeys posted by you today that I've thoroughly enjoyed. This one as much as any other, keep writing while you're on a roll - us selfish readers would surely enjoy more
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2016 3:15:00 PM
No lol. But thank you :) It makes me happy to hear you are enjoying them!
Date: 10/23/2016 10:15:00 AM
Beautiful poem :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/23/2016 10:30:00 AM
Thank you Carol. Have a nice day! :)

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