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MUSICAL HAIKU NOTES “ “ “ “ “ “ “ “ “ “ “ “ music grooves wild spell hip hop rock thumping acid heat--- wind’s fingers click sleek * rhapsody in jazz jiggling scents of post-war blues--- wildflowers dizzy * while hand-carved flutes stroll notes from a classic forest--- upturned grass listens * * oh ballads moan soft lyrics aching for lost love--- navel of snake writhes * * * of best, church choirs pray chanting angelic blessings--- white dove’s breath is touched! all rights reserved © CONTEST: P.D. ‘s HAIKU CRAZY FROM: nette onclaud

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Date: 6/10/2011 2:26:00 PM
Beautiful pieces of art,,loved the music in words in your haikus, nette.. Many Congrats on your wonderful win in this contest.love, gautami
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Date: 6/10/2011 1:03:00 PM
Wow Nette, enjoyed the big win here and best wishes for future ones.!
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:19:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., nette
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Date: 6/9/2011 5:52:00 AM
Many congrats on your well deserved win in P.D's contest.huggs*
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:07:00 PM
Really enjoyed your musical take here, nette-- loved that one about the grass ^_^ super congrats on your win with these melodic pieces :D hugs
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:43:00 PM
Nette! Congratulations!!!! Thank you for the awesome haiku's and supporting my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:39:00 PM
Congrats Nette luv on a super duper win in PD's contest with this musical bonanza of Haiku luv.. enjoy.. sweets///
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:31:00 PM
YOurs were really rockin and I am surprised not even higher on the list! Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:22:00 PM
I believe this is exactly what P.D wants from us.I'm sure this amazing write will do well in the contest. huggs***
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:51:00 AM
wowie, these are splendid. I can see mine slipping lower and lower down the list as I see more and more great haiku like these being posted. I can't believe I messed up on your rules again. I am really getting old to overlook so many things. Have a nice day ,Nette. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/6/2011 2:08:00 PM
Some very illusive stuff here. LOts of imagination. LOve, Dave
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:54:00 PM
This one is like a plane on the runway. It simply gets airborne and takes off. You really get this right and it improves on each one as it goes along. This ids good work, my dear! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 6/5/2011 1:22:00 PM
Terrific Haiku series Nette, exceptional write. I wish you all the best in pd's contest :) smiles 4 u
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Date: 6/5/2011 11:12:00 AM
Nette, wonderful and you're done! You on a roll, more please. I loved the serenade. Best to you in the contest~ Caryl
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:56:00 AM
Play on, Maestro! Each verse has a different feel to it and yet they are joined by one great thing -- a universal love for music, from acid rock to spiritual hymns. Great entry for the haiku contest! Wishing you success, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:38:00 AM
well now I feel like dancing and boogying on down the road Nette luv with this fantastic eneregetic set of Haikus...thinking I might redo my entry now..after reading yours and Chris..his is awesome as well.. I predict two front runners hers luv..good luck... with luv..
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:38:00 AM
Oh this was straight up stunning. Nice job!!!!
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:28:00 AM
This is a grooooovy, spiritual, yet jazzy haiku! This is super duper cool. Never imagined a dove's breath being white or possible to be touched! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:14:00 AM
A thing of beauty!!!! an array of music that soothes the soul ...Excellent entry!!! always Michael
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:41:00 AM
A full 7 for you!!!!
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:40:00 AM
WOW Nette!!I think these are among the best string Haikus I have ever read.Just excellent.Best wishes..
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