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Music At Midnight

His home is beneath the theater stage Disfigured, he remains within his cage Listening to melodies played onstage Fills him with loneliness, not rage Once a fine actor, the Phantom awaits midnight To sing alone, so fear he won’t incite For the “garish light of day” he finds too bright When he hears Christine sing, he bemoans his plight Hours pass until midnight when the theater’s empty And he lays his hands on each piano key Stroking them as he would her face on the marquis But only at midnight is his soul set free What would Christine think if she saw his face He senses the need his feelings to encase As much as he longs for her tender embrace He fears she would just leave him in disgrace Midnight, midnight, he awaits patiently So he can finally perform shamelessly This midnight ritual he enacts faithfully Singing to a woman he’d love undyingly He croons sadly, wishing for her ovation Absorbing the power of each note’s vibration Dreaming one day he’ll submit to temptation And reveal himself to discover her elation
* Based on the Broadway play “Phantom of the Opera” and its powerful song, “Music of the Night.” Most plays end just before midnight. “Garish light of day” is a line from the song. * Poem written Jun 6, 2014

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Date: 7/9/2014 8:32:00 PM
Simply beautiful Carolyn...Just stopping by to say hello...Hugs Tim
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Date: 7/2/2014 6:08:00 AM
I simply love the story and music of, 'Phantom of the Opera'. I play that CD in my car always. I know and sing along with every tune. Love what you have written, Carolyn. BFN Lainie
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Date: 6/30/2014 6:22:00 AM
Well penned Carolyn...congrats on your win
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:40:00 AM
Dear Aunt Carolyn, I wish you would have been able to see the play with me. I expect to hear the sound track at Aunt Bobbie's when we have our family reunion. She's seen this play twice and plays the music a lot. Love, Diane
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Date: 6/29/2014 9:15:00 PM
Congrats LNC! Ill be in touch soon. Have been under the weather. BG
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:27:00 PM
i have never seen Phantom of the opera, but I did enjoy your poem, I'm am curious to watch it now, well done on your win lady :)
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:12:00 PM
A wonderful poem about the amazing broadway show.....such a favorite of mine! I was lucky enough to see it performed in San Francisco many years ago.....so enchanting, and exciting to watch the chandelier hanging over the audience.... under the spell of the music!!! Your poem brings back a wonderful memory! Congrats, Carolyn!!
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Date: 6/29/2014 6:09:00 PM
I absolutely loved your poem, Carolyn! You are a great storyteller. Wonderful rhyming, as well!.... I haven't seen the play, but I always loved the classic silent film, "The Phantom of the Opera", starring Lon Chaney.... Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved!
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Date: 6/15/2014 1:07:00 PM
Another fine gem Carolyn! :-)Keith
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Date: 6/15/2014 7:43:00 AM
beautiful and touching piece on the Phantom, my friend
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:16:00 PM
What a wonderful write, loved it!
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Date: 6/12/2014 7:48:00 AM
Well this certainly got inside my mind . I wish you well in the contest .
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Date: 6/11/2014 8:05:00 PM
Take well earned bow, and the phantom would applaud you from somewhere in the old opera house, would I myself. By the way I wrote one on him myself, I've always been a fan of him, and the legend created by the old story created by his story. I may post it when it gets close to holloween. Thank you for sharing your vision on this old sad aster of the dark shadows. cheri
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Date: 6/11/2014 9:21:00 AM
The music in that Musical is so beautiful and haunting. I have it on CD and play it in my car all the time. Wonderful poem you have written bringing it all back to me, Carolyn. Sure to top the list. And...thank you for your comments on 'Father's Day'. bfn Love, Lainie
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Date: 6/10/2014 7:54:00 PM
Favorite line among many: 'Stroking them as he would her face on the marquis'...This is SO melancholy and so brilliantly written. I saw many operas growing up (My dad was an opera singer) but never had the privilege of seeing this one. And the winner is...(I think I know) - Tim
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Date: 6/10/2014 6:27:00 PM
hey, I did not know this about the Broadway plays ending right about that time. what a cool way to do the challenge. I know this will do well in the contest!
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Date: 6/10/2014 5:05:00 AM
I especially like the last stanza..I have on occasion written one using (tion) and it is easy to get rhymes..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:31:00 AM
This is awesome! Love every bit of it. Beautifully expressed and flowing with impeccable rhyme. Right....now I have to read it again....before midnight strikes:)) // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/29/2014 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn!! a very deserved win. // paul
Date: 6/10/2014 1:17:00 AM
SIMPLY STUNNING! Am speechless Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 6/9/2014 6:49:00 PM
Wonderful piece Carolyn...I didn't know about the plays ending before midnight....hugs Tim
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/10/2014 4:17:00 PM
Tim, I've seen at least 50 Broadway plays and none have gone past midnight. Perhaps the longest was "Les Miserables," but it was surely captivating. The Phantom can only play his music when the theater is empty. It's a beautiful story.
Date: 6/9/2014 6:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem about the wonderful Broadway play. A wonderful entry for the contest. I just read you comment on my latest. I am so glad if you found something helpful in it. Love you too. Joyce.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/10/2014 4:15:00 PM
Sweet friend, Your poems always touch my heart. I am always stunned by the magic you create with your pen! Love, Carolyn

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