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None of the photos are directly related to the poem, but provide some historical background to those in attendance at the slaughter of July 11, 2015.

 

 

This poem was written to over dramatize the events of a BBQ I had on July 11, 2015. Already a bad weekend, in hospital with an ear infection, the day before the neighbor’s dog in her joy to see me, cut up my legs and arms. So it was a wee bit windy, and we needed to tape the table cloth down, and Timmy who is all of 7 was helping me with the task, he would cut the tape, and I would tape the cloth. Well his aim wasn’t so good and he just about chopped off a finger, and let me tell you, I would rather be water boarded in Guantanamo than this! Yes I screamed bloody murder and ran to stop the flow of blood, and of course poor Timmy was crying and feeling bad, even this was just an accident. (Something we both remedied later on with very special Oreo cookie ice cream cones!!)

 

So I got to thinking of a poem, and as this was the birthday of an Acadian friend who was cooking the burgers, thus the mention of Cajun in the poem. Now Timmy’s father is from Switzerland, and so I was recently explaining to the family that around 1778 to 1786 Frederick Haldimand a Swiss mercenary/commander under the employ of the British, was the Governor of the Province of Quebec and also undertook the fruitless negotiations with Ethan Allen to make Vermont a separate republic and province of Canada ( British at the time)  * The first photo is of him

 

He came of course after the British defeat of the French and the American war of 1774. His job was to fortify the cities of Montreal and Quebec so has to prevent a possible second American invasion. I was teasing my Swiss friend that he was not the first to arrive here!

 

St Louis is simply the street I live on, and then because of out history here, I included the battle of the plaines of Abraham!

 

From one small event I weaved the past and present into one small tale!

It was a hot humid muggy evening The festivities were just starting Inebriated souls, and the smell of Cajun cooking The moon was sitting idly by, waiting for her role The smokey flavor of the night’s meal Sifting scents pleasing, The mixture of perfume and gourmet Evil lurking just underneath The flowers were radiant Laughter permeates the air Then the little ones, with beguiled charm Cut through the social soirée Blood spurts from body parts The killing fields of St Louis As patrons and saints are slaughtered Like lambs I feel the callus cut of the knife As my fingers fall to the ground I know the evil stench of horrors Has only begun to spread Like the roots of sinister wine Bordereau is the prison of the mind The lamb is now the Wolfe Montcalm would never fair well As limb and leg fall slain I cry out in horrific pain For the battle of St Louis I have been murdered in vain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/17/2015 5:35:00 PM
Very good write dear friend a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:08:00 PM
Ha ha, I almost forgot!
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Date: 7/15/2015 7:56:00 PM
Story teller extraordinare, Arthur ....you the man! 7 ;)
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Date: 7/14/2015 7:43:00 PM
Bel exercice tragi-comique! Quelles impressions sur une journée à marquer d'une croix blanche...
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Date: 7/14/2015 4:29:00 PM
Glad you explained it Arthur. I read it right after you post it and didn't know the history of St. Louis...we have a street named St. Louis near by...was it a battle, city, river, hockey player?...excellent tale...I'm glad all the players are okay...cheers
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Date: 7/14/2015 8:54:00 AM
You da man Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/15/2015 8:02:00 PM
Except on Thursday nights! thanks
Date: 7/13/2015 11:03:00 PM
I like what Kim says down here . YOu do have a way of spinning yarns, Arthur. It's a very special talent and you come up with some really funny things. Keep it up, and please steer clear of timmy when he is holding scissors (or was it a knife?)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/13/2015 11:07:00 PM
It must have been a Swiss army knife now that I think about it!!!
Date: 7/13/2015 8:26:00 PM
:-)))It is amazing how the mind works. I do believe you can spin a tale off a cap of a bottle of soda pop! Being not so familiar with the historical background, I nevertheless appreciate the over dramatization and the resulting write! Have I told you lately that you're a genius with these type of writes? I love the intro as much as the poem! By the way Arthur, have you taken your shots?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/13/2015 8:52:00 PM
Yes I took 2 brandy shots!!! thanks, I will have to think of a bottle cap and see what I can do!!!!
Date: 7/13/2015 8:21:00 PM
This feels different, did they medicate you at the hospital, honestly I do catch a description, a feel, something in this write that I am happy to read. You set the stage so well, I do love the first stanza, maybe that is what compels me inside, a captivating stage set, and a twisted occurrence which fits your style. You have done well :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/13/2015 8:50:00 PM
Any compliment from you is very sweet indeed!!!! :)
Date: 7/13/2015 8:04:00 PM
nice poem, and i hope your next BBQ is not like a war, you always write great ones, keep going my friend ~_°
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/13/2015 8:50:00 PM
Thanks Billy Next BBQ you show up for some Rum, ok?
Date: 7/13/2015 5:36:00 PM
your own rendition of events spells of riveting lines, arthur!... huggs
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Date: 7/13/2015 1:50:00 PM
Judging by the pictures, I take it that your poem has some reference to the battle of the " Plains of Abraham" in Quebec in 1759. Not only did Montcalm the commanding French general die in the battle but also the British commander: General James Wolfe. I rather enjoyed the poem Arthur but I do not understand the connection between the poem and distant events? A good poem though - I enjoyed the read! All the best! :) john
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/13/2015 8:48:00 PM
Thanks John and you guessed bang on, before I added a detailed explanation. The top photo was however of Sir Frederick Haldimand a Swiss commander! and somewhat later than that battle. This poem was a mixture of many ideas past/present
Date: 7/13/2015 12:48:00 PM
Very clever writing .great poem
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/13/2015 8:45:00 PM
Thank you kindly!

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