Mum

I love it that you are always there, Always there to care. I love it when you smile, I love it that with love it pile. You are always close, Especially when I need you most. But ill tell you what, The best thing I could have now. I have already got. what do you think it is. YOU OF COURSE who else would it be.

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/29/2013 12:09:00 PM

Outstanding, Carla. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/29/2013 7:34:00 AM

beautiful poem for your mom, congrats on your win :)

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2013 2:30:00 PM

Carla, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2013 5:24:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, carla

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2013 7:48:00 PM

Carla, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/23/2013 12:34:00 PM

Beautiful tribute to your mom Carla :)

Carla Jones

Date: 9/21/2013 3:39:00 AM

I dedicated this to my mum. without her I would be lost. she is the best thing that could of happened to me. especially when things get bad at school. thank you mum