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Mr Sun and Mrs Moon

above the sky high above the sun shines brightly as the moon she's past asleep radiant heat all over me a feeling so intense warm as the love I have for you and when it is dark and storms begin to gather God's tears falls from the above to cleanse the world below as the moon awoke Mr sun falls into slumber bringing life and serenity to the weary world below

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/8/2015 12:29:00 PM
An intriguing take on the subjects. Currently working on a collaborative write on the same with a different angle. Welcome back, kabayan. Hope to see more of your works in the coming days. :) Kim
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Date: 5/5/2014 3:02:00 AM
vivid imagery.. :) beautifully written indeed.. :) God bless you today and always.. :) lots of Pinoys here.. :), olive here.. God bless. :)
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Michael Hilario
Date: 5/6/2014 6:50:00 PM
thanks, God bless you too. It's good to know you're safe outside the phil - hope you can get back here soon and enjoy our country.
Date: 1/3/2014 9:02:00 PM
Hello Kabayan Michael! Thank you for visiting my page and leaving your kind thoughts in my box. Will check on you and the other great ones in soup. Hope time is friendly enough. But, thanks for taking time. the sun and moon are definitely universally intriguing as evidenced in your poem.
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Wendy Meyer
Date: 1/3/2014 9:05:00 PM
simply well expressed. great job!

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