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Mr Moon

Shining my night sky, Over the darkest hours of my life. Longed for your love, On a wish of a bit of bright light. Moon shine on me. Out in of nowhere it enlightened me, Nothing compares its beauty. Right there I stare, At its flickering beauty Everything is like a fantasy. Can I have you? A question I wanted to ask. Never had I ever expected, you Jumped up and shouted Atlast! Says your name in a poem, And I will spell it right. Because my love for you is more than just right. Everything now is like a dream, Nothing can stop me from smiling. Even trolls and ogres are like fairies Coz for me nothing is ugly. I love you and that’s what I feel, On this day and until eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/21/2016 10:12:00 PM
amour krezha cordova, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:55:00 PM
Amour, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:14:00 AM
Romantic poem in the moonlight Amour, well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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