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Mr Incomplete

You used to be a part of me Now all I do is make believe What friends are left, now all they see Is how my life is incomplete I went ahead and changed my name To Incomplete as of late At any given time of day That's the statement that I make Through all intents and purposes I'll make it through the worst of this Remembering our relationship And all that I poured into it Now as Mr. Incomplete I walk alone along these city streets Remembering the better half of me And how it all used to be Things have never been the same Since with your help I changed my name Want you to know it's not to late To change it back if you'll just say But as it is in all of this I'm living out my emptiness All of this came more or less On the day that you left You made me out to who I am That, no more than half a man Mr. Incomplete is where I stand Known far and wide throughout the land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/27/2016 9:19:00 PM
It is a sad one Mike! I think theres a lot of people out there that this poem is referring to! Another good one, just sad:)
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Mike Hauser
Date: 6/27/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 6/27/2016 4:14:00 PM
I had a huge lump in my throat reading this ... it is so sad Mike:-( hugs Jan xx
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Mike Hauser
Date: 6/27/2016 4:34:00 PM
Thanks...not about me of course, I've been happily married for over 30 years..and my wife's been happy most of that time!

Book: Shattered Sighs