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Moving On

Moving On
Unfulfilled dreams and wasted time, found out the hard way that you were never mine. Moonlit nights must have made me loca, stupid me, next time I’ll definitely be smarter.
How could I ever think I was your love? My mistake - I was a blind judge. Took me a while to see through your silly, fake smile; took me a while to see through your practiced guile.
A masterful seducer, bet you think you are so cool, yes, I feel like such a damn fool. Weaving a web of deliberate lies and deceit, your best subject is “How to Cheat, Cheat, Cheat!”
Don Juan has nothing over you, your middle name is “Master of the Game Two.” But never mind, Lothario, revenge is a dish served cold, and you're nothing to me now that I've broken through the mold.
Blowing your cover, it’s your loss, lover. ‘Cause I will certainly recover - Faster than you think, - Faster than you can blink, - Faster than a shipwreck, you’re the one who will sink.
But forget you, fool, I AM MOVING ON! I’m outta here – GONE!
05-08-2014 Contest: Moving On (09-12-2014) Sponsor: Anthony Slausen Placement: 8th Contest: Slamming Season (06-17-2014) Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placement: 10th

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Date: 9/13/2014 10:24:00 AM
Great poem that shows so much courage. Congratulations on your win Pandita
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 2:38:00 PM
Brenda, thank you very much for your kind compliments and encouragment! Pandita
Date: 9/13/2014 8:26:00 AM
I like yours, too. Great goodbye, Pandita!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 2:37:00 PM
Thanks very much, Faye. I am delighted that you like this one! Pandita
Date: 9/13/2014 8:22:00 AM
Good for you, I like your spirit! Congratulations on your win Pandita.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, dear Richard! Warmest regards. Pandita
Date: 9/12/2014 11:59:00 PM
Wow Pandita very inspiring bold write! That's the way it shud be! Damn you I move on! Congrats on huge win!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/13/2014 7:45:00 AM
Dr. Upma, many thanks for your kind congratulatory words! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 10:36:00 PM
That's the way to do it - don't tolerate crap from any one! Excellent write! Kika
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/29/2014 11:40:00 PM
Thanks much, Kika. I appreciate your support and encouragement! Pandita
Date: 7/30/2014 7:45:00 AM
Wow, awosome piece. the concluding verse is out of this world. well penned Pandita!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/30/2014 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Bongani, my friend for the sweet compliment which I very much appreciate!
Date: 6/25/2014 6:24:00 PM
Pretty powerful stuff, Pandita. People who choose to live like that are continuously sinking And don't know it. They deceive themselves and will never find the happiness that others achieve. well written and very strong..... Robert.
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/25/2014 8:54:00 PM
Thank you, dear Robert, for the wonderful kind compliments, support, and encouragement! Warmest regards.
Date: 6/19/2014 2:58:00 PM
Hi Pandita, thank you for the bottom reply... Linda
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Excellent write!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/18/2014 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend, for visiting and for your wonderful compliments! Kindest regards!
Date: 6/17/2014 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in slamming contest, Pandita
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/17/2014 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Dr. Ram for your kind comments! Kind regards.
Date: 6/17/2014 1:04:00 AM
Pandita.... Congratulations:) Thank you for the Slam Season Support... Stop by and enjoy my newest poem "Dear Mr President" OR my latest blog "Prettiest Poet Girl" if you like. No pressure. :):):) Hugs & Love ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/17/2014 7:19:00 AM
Hi Linda, I am delighted to place in your contest! Thank you very much! And I will certainly stop by soon! Best wishes.
Date: 6/5/2014 10:54:00 PM
Pandita You go girl. Get rid of that dirty rotten two timer. And find someone who will love you truthfully. Thank you for the great comment on my Butterfly poem
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/6/2014 6:30:00 AM
Hi Robin, that right - no time to put up with crap:)! Thanks for visiting and for your wonderful comments!!!
Date: 5/12/2014 11:14:00 AM
TOUCHE ! SEND HIM TO WHERE HE MUST GO - TO ANOTHER PICTURE SHOW.
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Louis Rams
Date: 5/12/2014 7:06:00 PM
then it's a double TOUCHE
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/12/2014 11:37:00 AM
Louis, thank you. That's exactly what I did! No tolerance for that kind of man!

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