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Moving House 1

Moving house Breaking news, time- brandished My auntie moving house Joining the last of the dots of blandishments Left dangling by kin far and wide While she coasted in the east Gonna cease to be where Her great grandpa felled Trees to make doors for a dwelling, Which helplessly helped the exodus By Tamravarni Which is also river like her And in movement like her intent. 8 jul 13, Freeverse S.Jagathsimhan Nair For Skat's Freeverse contest

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Date: 7/12/2013 7:39:00 AM
This is good Jag. I wish you luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 7/8/2013 11:42:00 AM
jag, the pang of moving is so well expressed here... your end lines clinches this read with a sense of surrender... how superb!..:) hugggs
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