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Moving Forward

Lasting memories linger lightly, Swarming in a sensitive soul; Weaving waves of wishes, Taking a terrible toll. Nasty nightly nervousness, Results in ranting rhymes; Harvesting of high hopes, And savoring sensual signs. Conspiring cosmic circles, Whisper winter warnings. Briefly believing blasphemy, Fights feelings forming. Insecurity injects inspiration, Rotting the ropes of revelation, Killing the chance of consolation, Providing the pride in proclamation. Empty enriched envy. Loose longing lust. Love lasts a lifetime. Try total trust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/8/2009 1:50:00 PM
Excellent piece Blaine >> James
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:34:00 AM
Blaine, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2009 9:12:00 AM
Love the last stanza!! Great alliteration Blaine and now that it is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/15/2009 7:01:00 AM
Blaine, Congratulations on your enchanting poem having won in the semi-finals. I wish you good luck in the finals. -Mohammad
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2009 10:03:00 AM
Blain - Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round, best of luck in the finals – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:26:00 PM
great alliteration. passionate is thy pen. a thought provoking piece....congrat on a well deseverd first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 2/27/2009 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2009 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week..Fascinating perspective...God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 2/26/2009 11:43:00 AM
Impressive use of this form!
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Date: 2/26/2009 10:03:00 AM
Excellent use of this form Blaine and I love the last two lines ... smile ... somehow they really tie into the title for me ... this is a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2009 6:32:00 PM
Blaine - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/24/2009 6:23:00 AM
Congrats Blaine on the featuring of "Moving Forward." Total trust is difficult at best. Vince
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Date: 12/11/2008 8:55:00 AM
Its really good! :) Oh and I'm too young for you... I'm 14 lol
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