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Mouth Watering Egg

mouth watering egg taste lies in soft yellow yolk outer shell allures

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/16/2015 8:45:00 PM

again i love your short poetry.

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/24/2015 10:07:00 AM

Many thanks my lovely friend for your appreciation and credit. Loved always,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/13/2015 10:39:00 PM

hehehe Bl when I saw the title I can't but smile and I did more when I read your senryu!!!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/14/2015 11:46:00 AM

Thanks God that my poem has brought smile. Thanks for your lovely comment my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Catherine Labeau

Date: 10/13/2015 5:32:00 PM

and the crack of the shell hard to take to swallow it all

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/14/2015 11:44:00 AM

Yes, you are right. Thanks for your beautiful comment my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2015 7:02:00 PM

this is very nice. Actually I prefer the white part when it is cooked!!

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/14/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/6/2015 1:28:00 AM

Brilliant, my friend, BLD! A7.

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/6/2015 1:10:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your support. Though it's funny but surely carries a great philosophy related to our sight and aspiration. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2015 6:08:00 PM

this made me smile BL:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/6/2015 1:11:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your smiling comment. Loved always,bl