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the majestic and
picturesque snow
capped mountains
left me
the view was
inhaling the 
fresh air was

the tranquil breeze
skimmed the surface
of my skin
and left me breathless 

peace and serenity
assailed my senses

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  1. Date: 10/23/2008 9:35:00 AM
    Such a lovely read as you place the reader there as well to enjoy the view, the feelings that you experience. Very well written. Michael

  1. Date: 10/19/2008 10:35:00 AM
    Oh so breathtaking! Please take me with you. : ) What a beautiful sight and feeling to experience. You painted it well! I am captured within your words. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 10/19/2008 7:54:00 AM
    Sounds like a view I had in Aspen one summer...The Maroon Bells. Good write, Deneen. I feel refreshed. Love, Daver

  1. Date: 10/19/2008 12:22:00 AM
    Thank you for your welcome comments D-nyce.Rgds Brian Have a good day

  1. Date: 10/18/2008 4:15:00 PM
    Hi Deneen Ahhh, you make me feel write at home. Looking out my study window I see the snow capped mountain range. This morning it was 15 degrees out. My cat stuck her nose out the door and turned to come back in with a sour puss look on her face. Winter has arrived here in Alaska. Sending warm thoughts your way my friend. Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 10/18/2008 3:30:00 PM
    Deneen I love the mountains more than just about anywhere else and this write really transported me there. Thanks, Nigel

  1. Date: 10/18/2008 10:20:00 AM
    Deneen I love this a lot. It sounded like a love poem with nature. Your heart is revealed in this piece. I am digging it.

  1. Date: 10/18/2008 7:19:00 AM
    Awesome job. A beautiful painting that speaks to all the senses. Very well done. Love Heidie

  1. Date: 10/17/2008 11:33:00 PM
    With a scene like this, sometimes you just want to stare and admire how lovely the nature is :) Teri

  1. Date: 10/17/2008 5:44:00 PM
    something for the imagination, this sounds so blissfully wonderful. Lena

  1. Date: 10/17/2008 5:05:00 AM
    Deneen this is superb. Bravo. A winner. Need I say more. God bless you Michael Torres

  1. Date: 10/17/2008 4:15:00 AM
    Deneen it won't be long until the Mountains up the road will be covered with snow - Love the view from my yard - beautiful poem hun - God Bless

  1. Date: 10/17/2008 2:41:00 AM
    Ah, a beautiful winter scene, lovely D, love Kristin

  1. Date: 10/16/2008 8:27:00 PM
    beautiful picture....made me feel like I was there....thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 10/16/2008 7:09:00 PM
    Your beautiful description says very well that it had been breathtaking! I love the mountains and this poem talks so enchantingly about them. Enjoyed the write very much:)Love, Chitra

  1. Date: 10/16/2008 4:19:00 PM
    We live just south of Mt. Shasta in Northern California, and West of Mt. Lassen (both vocano mountains). Your poem makes me cherish both mountains even more....I will step outside and appreciate them more today! Lovely! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 10/16/2008 4:12:00 PM
    next time take me with you. enjoyed. john