Get Your Premium Membership

Mountains

My summit like a steeple pierces into the soft cloudy heavens Therein an aerial view gives me unmatchable stature and grandeur When you come down to trek through my glades and lush valleys You unknowingly become a part of me and we merge into oneness Come and bag all the treasures you find in my nooks and depths I am an amalgamation of every beauteous wealth you perceive They have been preserved for your hungry eyes since aeons Not one rock, blade of grass or exotic flower I own in my name You look forward to visiting my ranges to soothe your eyes The serenity of my wooded heights will calm your tense nerves My veiled waterfalls and blanketed snow peaks have enthralled Poets and writers to laud my mountainous beauty in their fair works In my sweet meadows you spirits will elevate and Surge with joy at your escapades from the daily grind Clasp me in your arms and your lonely heart will fall in love With the simple naturalistic pleasures, unmasked of artificiality See how the sudden gusts find solace by resting against my shoulders Their tears burst through veiled waterfalls flowing into gushing streams Even loud cloud bursts fail to blemish my breathtaking acres For everything comes back with fresher looks and our lives rejuvenate July 12, 2016 For Julia Ward Mountains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/4/2016 12:49:00 PM
wow, Balveen. I can see how THIS was a winner. This is GREAT writing from you. And a belated congrats also. Marvelous personification.
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/5/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Probably the last I wrote a few months back.
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/5/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Probably the last I wrote a few months back.
Date: 7/22/2016 3:36:00 PM
Congrats well written x great write x
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/23/2016 1:04:00 PM
Thanks for appreciating, Wendy!
Date: 7/19/2016 10:54:00 AM
Nice win, Balveen. Skat
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/20/2016 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 7/18/2016 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your contest win...
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/20/2016 9:34:00 AM
Janis, thanks for your kind visit and wishes! Love...
Date: 7/18/2016 1:30:00 PM
Very lovely and well-written, Balveen. I love how your mountains spoke to us! Congratulations on your fine placement! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/20/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Sandra! I love how you always praise so sweetly and tenderly! Love, Balveen
Date: 7/18/2016 11:29:00 AM
Wonderful words choice Balveen. I love it. Congrats on your win. :)
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/20/2016 9:36:00 AM
How nice to be appreciated! Thanks Sunita! Love, Balveen
Date: 7/18/2016 9:19:00 AM
Lovely one Balveen,great personification and congrats on your placement!
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/20/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Sara for liking my personification!
Date: 7/18/2016 4:35:00 AM
well done great poem congrats x
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/20/2016 9:38:00 AM
Wendy, you're sweet! Thanks! Balveen
Date: 7/18/2016 1:50:00 AM
Beautifully put together, Balveen, a rich piece. Well done! Viv
Login to Reply
Cheema Avatar
Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/20/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thank-you so very much, Viv! Loved you calling it a rich piece! Balveen

Book: Reflection on the Important Things