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Her huge boobies he longed to discover - Vast mountains, quite unlike any other He undid her bra strap She gave him a big slap Said hands off, or I’ll tell my big brother! Inspired by but not for mountains contest 07~11~16

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 7/16/2016 3:48:00 PM

Very unexpected great write x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/17/2016 11:45:00 AM

Thanks Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2016 5:43:00 PM

Cute one..Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2016 5:47:00 PM

Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/15/2016 6:46:00 AM

Thanks for the laugh, Jan:) Hope they were not silicone modified ones! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2016 5:47:00 PM

LOL Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/14/2016 1:04:00 PM

Definitely a different take - good luck

Jan Allison
Date: 7/14/2016 6:52:00 PM

Thanks Dave but its not for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2016 8:45:00 AM

enter it, enter it. hahaha

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2016 11:52:00 AM

As if lol, and get yet another N/A to my growing collection lol:-) hugs Jan xx

David Smith

Date: 7/12/2016 8:00:00 AM

Real to life poetry. Good on you. We live in a real world but does not mean we can't smile. In fact we need to. Thanks for comment on my blog re poetry in schools. regards David in NZ.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2016 11:51:00 AM

Thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/12/2016 5:45:00 AM

Hilarious dear, Jan! Loved the spirit behind it! A seven!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2016 7:42:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx

Just James

Date: 7/12/2016 1:05:00 AM

Jan I love that you can cross the line...its fun on our side..:)..just ask Jean!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/12/2016 4:32:00 AM

LOL James I see Jean was writing on a similar theme :-):-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Hauser

Date: 7/11/2016 10:11:00 PM

You are so funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 10:14:00 PM

So are you I love your humour too lol:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/11/2016 6:29:00 PM

This made me chuckle! Thanks for your feedback and also for your comment - I made the correction.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 6:32:00 PM

Thanks Matthew I had fun with this poem:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/11/2016 5:48:00 PM

I enjoy the humor. Why don't you choose for contest? Love

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 5:51:00 PM

The sponsor doesn't enjoy my style or my humour so I will never put my poems in the contests but I do write and still post the poems if the theme takes my attention and I can write a fun poem:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/11/2016 5:45:00 PM

ah but one day, I shall visit Twin Peaks!!! Hilarious!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 5:50:00 PM

LOL:-) I wrote another version but this one is much better lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Woods

Date: 7/11/2016 4:48:00 PM

Crikey I just experienced a deja vu moment. I'm so sure I've been there before. ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 4:49:00 PM

LOL:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/11/2016 4:42:00 PM

Hi Jan, This is so hilarious and very creative-7:-)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Alexis when I saw the contest I was inspired to write but of course I won't submit it lol :-) hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/11/2016 4:24:00 PM

Wahhaaha..lol: )..Very sweet you are Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 4:25:00 PM

I had fun with the theme of course its not for the contest lol:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 7/11/2016 1:51:00 PM

Jan, lol this is do funny and I am loving it 7 ~

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 2:44:00 PM

Thanks Constance its not for the contest of course but inspired by it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 7/11/2016 11:50:00 AM

That is an amazing SNAP, as I have not being looking at others' poems yet today Jan. Your's are quite impressive in comparison to mine.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 12:08:00 PM

Isn't it amazing the co incidence jean - i was on the bus going into town when I read yours and my mouth dropped open as we are on the same wavelength lol:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/11/2016 11:17:00 AM

She sounds like a bit of a tease, he wanted to just have a squeeze, should let him have his way, because maybe one day, she'll find that they hang past her knees. Saucy write, Jan, Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/11/2016 12:08:00 PM

ha ha ha jean and Viv - Viv you should post that gem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 7/11/2016 11:52:00 AM

An old IRA boss wanted his wife done away with here. The hit man reported back that the hit had been successful, as he had shot her beneath her right breast. The boss replied "I told you to kill her...not kneecap her!!"