Mountains

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~Mountains~ (Double Choka) Over the mountains Sun shines in all its splendor Beautiful trees stand out tall Birds assemble there Eagles soar right to the top Wild flowers covers the ground Blue mountains stand grand Deers and bears roam all around Eyes can't get enough nice scene All trees seem to glow You can feel God's loving touch Breathe in enjoy all the view. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2013 February.20.2016

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Bl Devnath

Date: 2/21/2016 3:13:00 PM

Beautiful pictures with beautiful poem read from you my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2016 10:55:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Len Gasun

Date: 2/21/2016 8:57:00 AM

A very beautiful poem and image my dear Dorian! Refreshing to the soul. Thank you so much for sharing and also for stopping by. love lots and big hugs, GL

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2016 10:53:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,Leonora,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it my dear friend.Lots of love and big hugs to you too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Robert Heemstra

Date: 2/20/2016 7:51:00 PM

Beautiful! Trees are a sight worth seeing! Thank you for the write!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2016 10:49:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,Robert,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D