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Mountain Fog

Down a mountain, from the highest point it flows Cloudy white it comes into view, blocking sight The fog delights in its grandness, where it shows Power of the ground cloud, coming during night The humidity is high bringing moisture Having droplets of water in the mixture It flows down the mountain to valley below Leaving its trail of water on the ground low
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/6/2013 8:14:00 PM
Well done with this RISPETTO Russ! Excellent flow, rhyming and imagery. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/6/2013 7:18:00 PM
I could almost feel the cool mist..beautiful
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Date: 3/6/2013 11:29:00 AM
What an extraordinary picture of nature's phenomenon! Wonderful writing! Thank you!
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