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Motionless Intrigue

motionless intrigue youthful eyes stare in delight...... a hidden prayer dreamed

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 12:08:00 PM

that is deep

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/9/2012 12:24:00 AM

a clever haiku.... love it..pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 10:46:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Praying Mantis Haiku's". Love, Carol

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/10/2010 9:18:00 AM

Hmmm-I like it! Congrat's on your win Rick!~Tirzah~

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/9/2010 9:20:00 PM

congrats on your well haiku

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2010 1:00:00 PM

Congratulations, Rick, on your fine win. Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2010 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations Rick on your worthy win in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2010 8:24:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your winning poem in the Mantis contest.. way to go .. enjoy .. with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/8/2010 8:22:00 PM

Rick, this is the way I saw the prayer mantis as a child. You captured the "intrigue" of a praying insect so well. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2010 4:46:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Rick. I wish you the best always. Thank you for introducing Molly to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol

Molly Cooper

Date: 7/6/2010 8:47:00 PM

Love this~

Jim David

Date: 7/6/2010 7:17:00 PM

Samir, That's the genius of Rick Parise, who taught me how to write poetry....Vague, yet so strangely specific and meaningful... many wonderful algebraic expressions from this style of writing.... once i learned to let go, it got so much more productive... we are our own worst inhibitors.

Jim David

Date: 7/6/2010 7:13:00 PM

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2010 6:07:00 PM

If this is for the contest, it sends out the shout of winner here...Great idea to describe the photo...Good luck in the contest. .Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 7/6/2010 5:14:00 PM

Well done! Good luck in the contest: )

Samir Georges

Date: 7/6/2010 5:02:00 PM

So vague, yet meaningful, I feel it can be applied to many situations but always have the same power and presence. Youthful eyes stare in delight, says it all.