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Motion Sickness

The world spins Faster than a Ferris wheel Quick quick quick To make a young girl squeal 3rd rock from the sun Isn't steady, but sure can be fun Quick quick quick The cloud images become moving pictures Free entertainment But Vomitting has yet to begun At the pace of the man on the street Yelling obscenities And waving a gun Nope, that's not fun Not at all

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Wilfredo Derequito

Date: 3/26/2009 11:59:00 PM

I know the feeling, Autumn, it's not fun and you're not alone. Mine is even worse: I'm aboard a car or a bus that makes a sudden turn or a sudden stop...and that's all it takes to turn on the motion sickness that then stays continuously for three months or longer, forcing me to live off Dramamine tablets on a daily basis! A 35-year curse. So I know the feeling, you can bet I do. Now you stay away from them ferris wheels...and stay healthy. Fred