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Mothers Day

Mother’s Day is a special day
Which is celebrated in May
It’s a day to honour the woman
Who gave you life and made you a human 

I remember having made a card
Which mom read in the backyard
She was happy with the words I wrote
Because it had the following quote

“I will do everything as told
And will take care of you when you are old
I will always be an obedient son
Who will be like the shining Sun”

Benedict john(8years)
for thecontest 
Memories Of May


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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 9:30:00 AM
    Benedict, Congrats on your three win, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 9:14:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Benedict. Outstanding write. Great job. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 7:48:00 AM
    Benedict congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 5:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my "Memories Of May" contest Benedict. Love, Carol

    Date: 5/9/2012 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks mam I am so happy in winning the prize its all for mum. Benedict
  1. Date: 5/6/2012 12:06:00 PM
    One of the nicest Mother's Day card I ever heard, well done son, hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 10:14:00 AM
    sweet poem. Mums everywhere should be celebrated this month

    Date: 5/6/2012 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I Could not paste the card it's on face book .but this is what I wrote when I received the card. Elizabeth Benedict's mom May 11, 2011 Children say so much to their parents on the Mothers dayto make them happy.My son too made a card with so many things written on it but one thought was so inspiring it read" someday when my Mom gets very old I'll do everything I can to make my mom Happy" ... very thoughtful from an 8 year old. Sunday at 3:20pm
  1. Date: 5/6/2012 10:07:00 AM
    Benedict, welcome to the soup, this is a great dedication to your mum, well done, keep writing..David