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Morpheus Halitosis

Nightmare's foul bouquet, Effluent of restless slumber, Ochre smog, mind bog, Cleansing chill breath from newborn day Entry to "quadro" contest 12th January 2017

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Rob Carmack

Date: 1/15/2017 11:02:00 PM

A very unique approach to the contest Martin.

Mark Martin
Date: 1/16/2017 12:44:00 AM

Thanks Rob! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/13/2017 5:05:00 PM

A most creative and expressive take on this proposed pictorial theme, Mark. gl in the contest. Regards // paul

Mark Martin
Date: 1/13/2017 5:37:00 PM

Thanks Paul! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2017 8:36:00 PM

a unique write, Mark!! I want to try this one myself but it is filling up too darn fast. DANG!! Hope ya score!!

Mark Martin
Date: 1/13/2017 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! Interesting and inventive poetry form! :-)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/12/2017 6:22:00 PM

Yes, I am laughing inside. Great QUADRO! And it is definitely something many of us can relate to. Good luck in the contest.

Mark Martin
Date: 1/13/2017 1:17:00 PM

Thanks Dane Ann! :-)

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/12/2017 4:45:00 PM

Well done my friend...best of luck...god bless...^WW^

Mark Martin
Date: 1/13/2017 1:16:00 PM

Thanks WW! :-)