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Writing poetry is not easy..It is a very challenging past time if one tries to do forms and follow some terminology..
Morning wind tickled with whisper Willows thin limbs and ancient brow. Many days winds' chill was crisper, Forgetful of when; can't think now Life at times was richer, draw blank Of those events right at this time. Richness seems to come with each rank Of age increase, now don't need mime Mime one who has more worldliness. No! Let my mime be Jesus Christ. Let me become like him actless Let the Spirit draw me entice * Trying to do Tetrameter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/31/2012 1:01:00 AM
oh yes, this is simply wonderful Sara. not really sure what tetrameter is but this is very well-penned poem
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:40:00 PM
The wind will blow the rain and snow. The church stands still in rightous glow. As time goes on to change it's mind. The church doors open to all mankind.
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Date: 1/28/2012 2:51:00 PM
Exquisite imagery of the wind "whispering" through the willows, Sara. I think we learn to deal with life's challenges better as we get older, but faith is essential to carrying us through these times. (I know nothing about tetrameter, but I love your poem, especially the last verse.) Best wishes in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2012 1:37:00 PM
Lovely piece, my friend
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:38:00 PM
Wonderful thought of prayer, God bless you always, bl
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Date: 1/28/2012 10:30:00 AM
simply beautiful collection of words Sara.. grand imagery in this excellent composition.. breathtaking flow..luv..
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Date: 1/27/2012 9:59:00 PM
You capture with your poetic prowess Mrs. Sandra. I love that last stanza as it exemplifies what we should all yearn and strive for. I must say, I always find myself at a loss when I try to get my meter down right, so kudos for keeping an eye on it :)
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:41:00 PM
Enjoyed this thank you Sara , Declan xx
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