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Morning Muster

The morning has started with a trace of a dew An ascent through the tussock ignites the new day Trailing huntaways eager to work on the ewes Awaited shrill whistles loose the dogs on their prey. A new shepherd surveys as proceedings unfold Sinewy figures employing hill sticks with care. Spectacular vistas with a dawn of pure gold Formidable mountains looking solemn and bare. Below a glass lake reflects sharp rugged peaks A boat carves the water, slicing the image in half. Sounds of dogs barking as sheep break from a creek White ribbons slowly form in planned choreograph. Shepherds whistles are mingled with thousands of bleats Descending sheep merging to form an earth cloud. Above dust and steam rise, as if to compete Wisps of white rolling as matagouri stands proud. A fantail flits on the first hints of the breeze While a waxeye settles amid two twists of barb wire. As sheep reach a plateau, the expanse seems to tease Though allured, dogs restore order on sheep that inquire. Searching mouths hastily nibble tests of fresh grass Stragglers are hastened by gleeful dogs and their bark Looking back up the hill the commotion has passed Hawks floating on thermals within a large arc. Mid morning arrives as the sheep enter the yards Dogs climbing in troughs and having rest in the sun The new shepherd knows this is his time to safeguard His future life on the land has now just begun.
**If I haven't quite portrayed the picture properly this may help. http://www.photomack.co.nz/farming

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Date: 7/12/2016 8:10:00 AM
Mark, this is a beauty. lovely scenery you have painted with your words. Its been years since I have been on a farm, so I really enjoyed your gem.
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Date: 7/12/2016 1:32:00 PM
Gudday Wilma, nothing beats the early parts of the morning as the sun is rising. The dogs getting excited about the day ahead, men quietly thinking where the stock camps are (and have been for a 100 years). A few tweaks here and there required, but this one just came out right.
Date: 7/11/2016 7:07:00 PM
Mark, I could picture the whole scene, what a wonderful write and I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 7/12/2016 4:24:00 AM
BW your comment has made my day. I suspect you understand/possess the connection to the environment that a number of rural people have.
Date: 7/11/2016 2:02:00 PM
A 7 for this absolutely beautiful poem! You are an artistic poet. Janice
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Date: 7/12/2016 4:21:00 AM
Thank you Janece, you are to kind. I'm not overly artistic, I just love the great outdoors and try and put it down as best as I can.

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