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Morning Fun

The lofty hills looked to the valley below and smiled the trees stood like sentinals guarding the valley floor Overhead the sun laughed, pouring warmth over the landscape below The clouds played hide and seek and made the sun shine harder It was a playful afternoon on a beautiful spring day The weeping willows weep for the sun did not find them yet. The birch bark hide from the sun above The poplars smiled for they stood above the rest already soaking the hot sun The grass around their feet was wet with dew Again the sun smiled on a perfect afternoon. 8/30/12

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Date: 9/7/2012 10:43:00 AM
An appreciative thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Phyllis. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2012 8:05:00 PM
it is great write Phyllis
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Date: 8/30/2012 12:28:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem to wake up and read Phyllis...don't know if you are related to one of my supervisors by the name of Angela, a very nice lady indeed...I enjoyed this pieced and it reminds me of waking up back home in Jamaica and going outside to find the mangoes hidden between the long green grass all wet with the night's dew. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 8/30/2012 10:25:00 AM
Now that autumn and winter are next we must enjoy all the sunlight that will shine. Let the sun shine! (at least here in the "cold north".) Gorgeous and playful poem Phyllis. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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