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Morning Dew

Morning Dew Does no one hear depth of this darkness Of it's presence within our mist So heavy it rains on the Glory of life We choose to let it be Not to see Words of choice To hide it from display It will grow From seed To plant To tree It's roots of hate have already captured some I thought these souls were safe from harm But now they have joined and seem bound to the roots that have entangled them No where To run To hide The daylight grows darker daily as it struggles to survive How can mankind repeat these atrocities over an over Justifying their hate in any form We have learned nothing For our young we create the gift Of hope Of love So wondrous in the morning dew Why have we chosen again and again to Let the darkness rule our days.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/18/2017 8:49:00 PM
Deep...
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Date: 3/28/2017 8:48:00 PM
This is very nice :)
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Date: 3/26/2017 11:27:00 AM
nice short lines
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Date: 3/22/2017 1:02:00 PM
Really enjoyed the use of short imperatives to shape your inspiring poem, taking the reader on a moral journey
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Date: 3/22/2017 1:21:00 AM
Awesome....Could feel your thoughts running through your words and sadly repeat this generation after generation. Aptly put... :) Ram
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Date: 3/21/2017 12:09:00 PM
Great write Ninette, one to make you stop and think awhile. God Bless. D.
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Date: 12/23/2014 3:10:00 PM
Stopped by to read another of your poems, Ninette. Captivating topic and content. It is up to us to retain the beauty and hope that dawn presents us. Take care. // paul
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:52:00 AM
Within darkness our soul is renewed and prepared for the light. If you have a chance read my poem "Yellow Shoes in The Darkness" this is a tremendous first offering you have given us. Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:32:00 PM
NINA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/25/2014 2:16:00 AM
Youve captured and drawn very provoking thoughts in this excellent poem! Nice imagery my dear friend Nina! Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/24/2014 6:11:00 PM
excellent pen love how this drew carey
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Date: 11/23/2014 6:58:00 PM
Beautiful , love the imagery in this poem, very thought provoking !!
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Date: 11/23/2014 9:53:00 AM
An interesting, thought provoking write. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on an avatar or name to go to anothers poems. Leave a comment and that person will have a permanent link back to your works... Keep writing.
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Ninette Carey
Date: 11/23/2014 10:36:00 AM
Thank You , for the Encouragement.. Hopefully next I will be uplifting! Thanks Carol!!
Date: 11/23/2014 4:56:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Nina - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/22/2014 9:47:00 PM
The dew mornings bring new feelings.Nice theme.Regards dear poet Nina. -Safa
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