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Morning

low fog tumbles hushed a crisp air cleansing my sins- a light of hope shines... silent solitude morning sun...sure and willing- I rise to conquer... without compromise the yellow feathered sky yields powdered blue promise... _________________________ Poet ~ Rick Parise Aug. 25th 2011

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Date: 8/31/2011 10:00:00 PM
Wonderful Senryus Rick.Congrats on your 2nd place win.
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:30:00 PM
for some reason, this makes me visualize wrestling... thanks for the write, rick ~n
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Date: 8/30/2011 9:53:00 PM
Congrats Rick on a splendid second place with more magnificent poetry my friend..lovely..
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Date: 8/30/2011 4:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this expressive work..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2011 7:21:00 AM
Beyond beautiful ^Rick is this well deserved winning piece congratulations. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 3:05:00 AM
hey Rick congrats on a great 2nd place, David
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:19:00 PM
congrats on your second place win Rick, great job
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Date: 8/26/2011 8:15:00 AM
Not convinced by the third verse, I guess you had to see it to understand what you are describing. All very nicly put together though.
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Date: 8/25/2011 8:22:00 PM
Nice one...my favorite part of the day...BG
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today ^Rick. Love, Carol
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