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More Than a Pretty Smile

There she was chasing a rabbit with 1 am coffeecakes and weak tea She didn’t notice I was watching from the branches of an olive tree A lone smile hidden amongst swirling smoke rings in a foreign accent To the gazebo she ran with its straw grass tables and pleated cushions in hibiscus print fabric no one would sit on My eyes followed her as she darted around manicured boxwoods and cherub statues spitting water onto sleeping lily pads, following the same schedule as the other…identical She came upon a dandelion and asked politely, “Pardon me, but have you seen a…” The weed interrupted, “Didn’t…don’t do drama dreams dancing deliriously down donut distracted ditches” “That’s dumb” she replied with a giggle and a snort This must be her fun, I think, trying to catch a white ball of fur, big, then small, then smaller still like a thimble seeking a thread, when now she is stopped in her ziggy zagging tracks by a June bug singing, “I see, I see, in front of me Dessert, dessert, set out for free A chocolate pie, a chocolate pie in menus written on the sky” Perplexed she climbed upon its back and flew, holding onto red leather shoulder pads with black dots changing shapes, ducking winged arches that covered the vestibule they soared through when a sharp turn pitched her to the opposite side… Landing with a thud, her new dress now soiled between the wrinkles in time that had ticked away on a clock faced sun named Ray She cried carrot tears, orange sherbet streams on peach tone cheeks, marmalade miseries and mango miscues piddling on her patent leather shoes, ready to give up When it appeared, hopping happily Jumping into her lap and licking her face She caressed its fur, removing sticker burs and scratching just the right spot, as its right rear leg thumped with joy Then lifting the bundled bunny to her face, she kissed it tenderly with wild cherry gloss lips, or should I say…kissed me for you see, all along, it was me "And you thought I was nothing more than a pretty smile…"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/30/2018 5:36:00 AM
Yep, clapping. And this sir - 'marmalade miseries', my favorite verse, my favourite stanza. I love it.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/30/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thanks again my friend. Another of my favorites here. I had a blast writing this one.
Date: 10/7/2016 10:11:00 PM
A very interesting take here Chris. I've written a poem about having "More Than Just a Pretty Face" or about how amazing "Her Smile Is"....but this was like an adventure here...I have to agree with Daniel. It was a world wind of a ride. Good Job! MC
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Chris Green
Date: 10/8/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Marquis. I'm thrilled you had fun on this adventure of my crazy imagination. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 10/7/2016 1:46:00 PM
Reads as if somebody has been into the Alice Carroll medicine cabinet. Lol Your imagination is traveling warp speed. A fantastic poem, Chris. I love everything about it and I too shall gift thee A7
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2016 2:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Daniel for your wonderful comment. I'm thrilled you enjoyed reaching into that cabinet with me. :)
Date: 10/7/2016 9:21:00 AM
Apparently I'm in a tizzy today, forgot to rate this 7. Where's the ten? :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2016 11:07:00 AM
Smiling here. :)
Date: 10/7/2016 9:18:00 AM
I wrote an entire review and its gone to the ether. I'll try this again, flabbergasted by this awesome story, and I don't usually use that word, it's so overdone, but this one deserves it. I could get high reading your poetry, which might have been your state of mind whilst writing this mind-blowing gem!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/7/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Paloma for your always kind comments on my poetry. As far as my state of mind at the time of writing this, no comment. :)

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