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Moon's Tears

The moon cries tears Of the harvest style I see She lays down the law That I must understand her And her certain pull on me
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/6/2012 6:01:00 AM
You combined science with witty personification...this is clever. Very clever. You make the moon appear as a woman to reckon with! :)
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Date: 8/31/2012 12:03:00 PM
Nice personification of the moon, Russell.
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:01:00 AM
I like..the last line is just great. BG
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Date: 8/31/2012 10:28:00 AM
Oh..Like this one Russell.Very good tanka.
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Date: 8/31/2012 8:27:00 AM
Yes, we do forget that the moon has a pull on us just like it does on the earth and the tides..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Great idea for a work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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