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Moonlight Serenade

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For the Enchantment Through a Prism contest.

Mark Halliday Enchantment through A Prism contest 24 December 2014 Soft moonlight Reflects off my guitar As I wait for you 'neath your window. I spy your shadow silhouetted by a light. Taking a deep breath, I start to sing and finger my guitar; An air of unrequited love, and the sadness of life in the shadow. Title # 3

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Daver Austin

Date: 5/9/2015 8:34:00 AM

Shades of Glenn Miller. Your unrequited love is touched nicely in the, the guitar being such a sensitive sound. Love, daver

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/11/2015 7:14:00 AM

I was thinking more like a musical Cyrano De Bergerac. Thanks for commenting.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 5:02:00 PM

Mark, you are so sweet with the reply on the bottom. LINDA

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/11/2015 7:13:00 AM

Meant what I said.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/1/2015 2:47:00 AM

Happy new year, Mark and congrats on he win

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/30/2014 9:59:00 PM

I really like this Mark, congratulations on your win. All the best to you and yours in the New Year.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/30/2014 11:46:00 AM

Congrats on the win Mark and happy new year in advance...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 12/30/2014 11:27:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Mark:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/25/2014 8:50:00 AM

Nice and lovely take on the theme of the contest, Merry Christmas, Mark

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:25:00 PM

Thanks. Happy New Year!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/24/2014 9:58:00 PM

NOthing more painful than unrequited love..Very well expressed. Happy Holidays. BG

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:27:00 PM

Thanks. Completely fabricated though. Happy New Year.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/24/2014 7:32:00 PM

Well done, Mark. I can clearly picture these images and feel your sense of sadness. Merits a top rating. // paul

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:28:00 PM

Thanks. Completely fiction though. Married since 1990. Happy New Year!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2014 7:07:00 PM

A Lovely Serenade, Mark,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:32:00 PM

Thanks. All the best for you and yours in 2015! Always enjoy your comments. We're in the middle of moving into a quaint old house we purchased. Not much of a Christmas (moved about 4 carloads of boxes and small items yesterday), but a great start for the new year.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/24/2014 2:08:00 PM

such beautiful imagery Mark good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/24/2014 4:33:00 PM

Thanks Jan. It was fun.