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Moonlight On the Seine

We watched the moonlight on La Seine Glissading down in gold refrains But then, it seemed, the silence crept with old cliché's, we can't forget ... The moon's façade disguised the pain... C'est la vie, what would be gained to wish for things which can't remain ... But goodbye tears, are sometimes wept We watched the moon The same old songs are sung again Where lyrics speak in whispers, kept A déjà vu, that lingers yet Of love that left just sweet regrets We watched the moon
______________________________________ For the Contest: "C'est la vie"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/13/2014 8:46:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful poem, it is like deju vu seeing you tops on another winners list :) always happy to see you there ;)
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Date: 11/13/2014 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot win Carrie.
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Date: 11/13/2014 7:06:00 AM
Nice going, Carrie. Congrats. xxxRalph
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Date: 11/13/2014 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on the top place win, carrie
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Date: 11/12/2014 11:54:00 PM
Superb, loved it Carrie and congratulations
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Date: 11/12/2014 10:07:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Very moving poem. Nicely structured with sad images. I have only travelled on the Sein River in deep winter with heavy snow coming down. Paris will always hold a special dark magic taste of life for me. I love the place. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Earl
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Date: 11/12/2014 6:05:00 PM
Very nice poem, Carrie. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 11/12/2014 5:02:00 PM
I'm having a déjà vu, Congratulations on winning first place with this breathtaking write.
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:59:00 PM
Love it, Congratulations.
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:21:00 PM
simply beautiful - many congrats on your top spot Carrie:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2012 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#194" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2012 2:38:00 PM
Wonderful theme for the lyrical rondeau, GREAT win, Carrie. Congratulations on this gem.
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Date: 8/5/2012 2:31:00 PM
WOW, beautiful, Carrie!! Congrats on another wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:12:00 PM
lovely poem, Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/5/2012 11:30:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, very good..David
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Date: 8/5/2012 11:01:00 AM
Very nice Carrie. Congratulations on your win. I was just on the Seine in May. Take care Lee
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Date: 8/5/2012 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie another well deserved win xx
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Date: 8/5/2012 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Wonderful, wonderful write. You are very talented.
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Date: 6/14/2012 5:35:00 AM
A belated congratulations Carrie on your placement in Cyndi's "Un, Deux, Trois" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:29:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:13:00 PM
c'est une piece de brilliance et tres beau ! Je l'aime beaucoup mon amie, Carrie! Thanks for the comment and as far as the oops..... c'est la guerre! :)
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Date: 6/3/2012 2:30:00 PM
Great work that reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this Sunday afternoon..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/31/2012 7:01:00 PM
An enchanting, yet melancholy write dear poet. I love when the poets, squeeze the French out of me...*smiles* Great write Carrie ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 5/30/2012 11:01:00 PM
hey, you chose rondeau too!! It's one of the best I've seen!! it simply glissades!!!
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:39:00 AM
Carrie - I like this lovely written poem, a pleasure to read all your poem - always. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/30/2012 10:39:00 AM
ps. luck to you in contest!!!!
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