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Moonlight On the Countryside

From deep beyond the canyon rim, Appearing at first night; The moon appears upon a whim And relays its borrowed light. Then rising there above the knoll, Through wisps of misty white; The moonlight falls as flakes of snow Upon the countryside. ~M

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Sharon Gulley

Date: 10/25/2016 12:42:00 PM

WOW! I am so overwhelmed by the so many beautiful writes you have, Mel. I have been reading your work today and all I can say is that I am so glad I stopped by to read and I am honored you liked my poetry. You are awesome. Thank you for a enjoyable day of reading. A(7) for me and another Fav. Sharon

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/4/2014 7:31:00 PM

What picture perfect post card your placed before my minds eye, it's simply beautiful my friend, so simple and light but it impacts your inner soul with a warmth's beauty. Thank you so much for sharing such a special write tonight cheri

Mel Merrill
Date: 5/5/2014 12:05:00 AM

You are too kind, but that's a good thing :) I very much appreciate your kind words, and for taking the time to read this poem--kinda close to my heart. Hugs, Cheri ~M

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/4/2014 5:26:00 PM

simple and very lovely poem Mel most enjoyable write hugs

Mel Merrill
Date: 5/5/2014 12:06:00 AM

Thank you Shadow. Kind of you to drop by and read--and comment. Hugs ~M

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/4/2014 9:45:00 AM

Awesome imagery Mel. Love the last two lines in the first stanza. The moon is often my muse too. Xx~Xx

Mel Merrill
Date: 5/5/2014 12:10:00 AM

Yeah, it is for me. Why is that? Some kind of romantic thing, I suppose. I'm honored that you read this, and I'm pleased that you liked it. It's a special poem for me, moonlight and all. Beautiful avatar, btw. Hugs ~M

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2014 8:22:00 AM

Fabulous write Mel the imagery is sublime - i love this poem! hugs Jan xxx

Mel Merrill
Date: 5/5/2014 12:12:00 AM

Ironwoman! Hope things are better in your world. Thank you so much for the read and generous comment. You know I appreciate it. Hugs ~M

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/4/2014 6:41:00 AM

you have painted a picture with your words love. how marvelous it is. :)

Mel Merrill
Date: 5/5/2014 12:16:00 AM

Van Gogh and me. I had the brush, so I figured, why not paint? Thanks for liking this one, babe ~M

Vicki Acquah

Date: 5/4/2014 6:36:00 AM

Bravo this is a cheerful thought to wake up to full of the simple beauty of nature. One good poem deserves another. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a real comment.

Mel Merrill
Date: 5/5/2014 12:18:00 AM

I try to get around, but it's hard. Thank you for reading this, and for taking the time to nicely comment. It is greatly appreciated. Hugs ~M

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/4/2014 2:27:00 AM

Mel...your work astounds. Beautiful imagery! Such a beautiful description of nature and its charm. I'm a lover of the non and stars. Your last poem of the Rose is so deep and replete with meaning. The truth therein mesmerizes. You are very talented. I haven't visited of late as I've been unwell. My heart is heavy.... my words dry. Thanks for the visit to my work today. It brought me joy...

Mel Merrill
Date: 5/5/2014 12:24:00 AM

I know what a heavy heart feels like, it sucks. I'm sorry to hear that you are so afflicted, but I hope it's a passing thing. Meanwhile, if my poems or comments can bring you any peace--any joy, then I have won at least a small victory, and I shall bravely carry on. Love and comforting hugs ~M