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Moondance

I was alone in my room, Heard someone tap on my window, Hey Jack quickly let's go my friend said, I must be daft because I left with her. Holding hands we arrived at the beach, Waves catching our feet as we reach, A cloud was blocking our sight, And when it passed,we were awed. The pull by the moon was magnetic, It's cool aura washing down my face. I smile like i never done before, Without my sight I could feel it's beautiful. We both splash into the waters, A faint voice coming from behind us , A tug and hug from her and then she was gone, Just as my mum rush to my side and hugged. Honey why did You come here all by yourself? You could have been swept away by the tide. Did she not see that I was not alone? A thousand questions played my mind as we walk back home .

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Date: 11/17/2013 7:47:00 AM
- Congratulations....it deserved to be higher up on the winning list, Danesh ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 11/18/2013 7:04:00 AM
thank u so much tat means a lot to me
Date: 11/17/2013 3:13:00 AM
Danesh, Congratulations & thank you for supporting my contest... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:44:00 AM
- Wooow ... very skillfully written Danesh! - Impressive!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 11/4/2013 7:06:00 AM
it Wat an inspiration thank you
Date: 11/4/2013 4:31:00 AM
What an intriguing poem, Danesh..very well written. You have me wondering as well! :) Thank you for posting this enchanting piece. Hugs
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 11/4/2013 7:08:00 AM
thank you so much Eileen it means so much to me

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