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Moon of Sadness

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Moon of Sadness

Nude in front of you
Slapped by bats but kissed by light
Enigmatic scars
No one understands but YOU...
I dream of dreams of moon life...

I pose - you draw me
You take pictures of my soul
Wondering what's wrong...
Sadness... immortality 
How much Love I cannot give!


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  1. Date: 7/8/2012 10:28:00 AM
    This is a beauty with a pinch of sadness Iolanda. I see congratulations are in order as well. Hope you are having a fabulous weekend. love Wilma

    Scripca Avatar iolanda Scripca
    Date: 7/8/2012 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Wilma!
  1. Date: 2/27/2012 3:31:00 PM
    Iolanda, how goes the ESL job thing? Will you be doing home stay?

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 5:51:00 PM
    Beautiful !!

  1. Date: 12/16/2011 9:58:00 PM
    I'm glad to see this was a winning poem,Iolanda. Belated congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 11:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 2:54:00 PM
    Congratulations on a very fine win, Iolanda! Enjoyed! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 8:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Iolanda.

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 11:31:00 AM
    That second line of yours struck me... I like the contrast that you put in there, Iolanda! I like how you gave this a melancholic feel...another unique take that I saw for this contest :)

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 10:41:00 PM
    Another wonderful contest entry.. Good luck in the contest... a very touching write... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 9:00:00 PM
    I love the sadness you invoke with this poem, Iolanda. Always you employ atmosphere! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 9:11:00 AM
    An excellent write Iolanda . Have a nice weekend. love phyl

    Scripca Avatar iolanda Scripca
    Date: 12/2/2011 3:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope you have a great weekend with your son too, dear Phyllis! Love, iolanda
  1. Date: 12/2/2011 8:55:00 AM
    Wow, wonderful, introspective, and melancholy this is!! What a deep, and unique poem this is! A winner!! ps.........Happy Holidays, hope all is better in the New Year!! :)

    Scripca Avatar iolanda Scripca
    Date: 12/2/2011 3:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Carrie! ...and Happy Holidays to you too!!! Love, iolanda