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Moon and the Twilight

As I look up The strong light from the moon is blocked by the twilight underneath As I look inside The unexplainable wants out But is blocked by the fear underneath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/6/2011 10:26:00 AM
Tommy Flott dikt "Moon and the twilight" Heia norge Anne-Lise
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Date: 11/15/2009 4:39:00 AM
Very thoughtful write. Welcome to soup. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2009 12:52:00 AM
I really liked this poem. It may be short but these words say a lot. Keep up the good work and welcome to the soup.
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Date: 11/4/2009 3:37:00 PM
Welcome to the soup,you re gonna enjoy it here, love the metaphors shadowing emotions..excellent--Charma
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Date: 11/4/2009 11:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this afternoon Tommy. Wishing you a week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:22:00 AM
Poised poem. All the best.
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Date: 11/4/2009 7:54:00 AM
Excllent metaphoric comparison, Tommy! Welcome to Soup, Sincerely, Moses
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