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Moon And I Tonight Standing in the shadows I fall down to my knees. Looking at its beauty as I peek between the trees. Thinking that I go unseen the moon it cannot see. Yet feeling oh so far away there's someone watching me. Forever never changing the moon remains the same. How can it be it seems to me it's calling out my name. Rising from the shadows out of my hiding place. Finding comfort for my soul in moonlight on my face. The stars for now are hidden the moon still shining bright. It seems like we are all alone the moon and I tonight. Answers to the questions sought, the things I didn't know. Uncovered and discovered here in the moonlights glow. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 8/23/2015 6:35:00 PM
Light heartedness in the moonlit glow...lovely
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 8/23/2015 6:46:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 8/23/2015 5:55:00 PM
oh this is simply delightful Edwin the imagery is stunning:-) hugs Jan xx I love a bright moonlit night and walks down by the sea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 8/23/2015 6:00:00 PM
Me too!
Date: 8/23/2015 5:45:00 PM
Excellent piece Edwin. Sometimes it feels like we are alone with the moon.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 8/23/2015 6:01:00 PM
Yes it does!

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