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Moon and Blooms

As a rule the room Is full of ennui and ash Except when your moon Peeks behind bits and pieces Fireflies in moment’s clichés Moments normally Insipid tea in old cups Except when your look Blooms all over the shadow Waiting in acute hot sun ____________________________ 7/9/16

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Date: 9/10/2016 10:15:00 AM
awesome imagery around the moon, Probir. Lovely and romantic.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/10/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Date: 9/8/2016 12:17:00 PM
I have to say this - WOW ... CayCay
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/9/2016 12:39:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/8/2016 7:17:00 AM
there is that someone special who always lights up our lives. lovely poem
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/8/2016 7:19:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/7/2016 12:07:00 PM
These are lovely and romantic Probir. I love how you let the moon set the mood. ; ) 7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/7/2016 7:50:00 PM
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Date: 9/7/2016 10:00:00 AM
Very nice, Probir. I love this one. In my humble opinion, I think it takes a great deal of talent to express thoughts in very few lines. Most people take so long to express themselves. You have done it very well with this write:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/7/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thank you ...

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