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MONOLITH

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MONOLITH

monolith wrapped
with blackish aura
now old lion has
lost it's strength 
wiggles under the
iron gossamer
sometimes yelps
yawns and sighs 
waiting in labyrinth
for macabre end




For P.D'S contest

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  1. Date: 8/30/2014 7:21:00 AM
    Congratulations to your Elegy BL! :-)

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/30/2014 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot for wishing me congrats and for your nice comment. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 8/28/2014 9:21:00 PM
    Powerfully descriptive! Waiting in the labyrinth for macabre end, what a great way to close the poem, I enjoyed this and all the meanings it holds. Grats on your win ;)

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/29/2014 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot for wishing me congrats and for your nice comment. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 8/27/2014 6:00:00 PM
    BL, this poem is one of your best. Congrats on a well deserved win.

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/28/2014 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My lovely friend, many thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 8/27/2014 12:37:00 PM
    Thank you for the wonderful reply..LINDA

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/27/2014 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are welcome. Loved always, my *friend, bl
  1. Date: 8/27/2014 5:29:00 AM
    Short and sweet, with elegiac tone, Congrats, BL

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/27/2014 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My lovely friend, many thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 8/27/2014 5:28:00 AM
    Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/27/2014 12:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My lovely sweet friend, many thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 8/27/2014 5:12:00 AM
    great imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/27/2014 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My lovely friend, many thanks for wishing me congratulation. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 8/26/2014 9:42:00 PM
    hello My friend, BL, WOW, you actually did one of my contests.. Now that put a smile on my face.. :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/27/2014 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I love your sweet smile always and keep this treasure on your face always. All of us in the P.S. see your sweet and nice smiling aura in the avatar's image. Thanks a lot for wishing me congratulation on my win. My *friend, loved always,bl
  1. Date: 8/11/2014 6:08:00 PM
    this is great imagery here. I sure like it!!

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/27/2014 12:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 8/9/2014 7:41:00 AM
    Hi bl,i see a stone lion here, struggling against the elements, out of sight,,i may be wrong,,but your poetry always has me thinking

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 8/10/2014 3:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are always genius and I have already told you that I can't fly out from your catch. Yes, that's. Many thanks for your nice perfect comment. Loved always my lovely friend. May I regard you as one of my best friends in the P.S.?