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~ * o * `~ ~ * o ~ * o * ~ [ ] ~ ________ [ ]___________________~ / In the early morn the house is chill / \ / with children still asleep in their bed. / \ / In my warm robe I amble down / [+] \ / the stairs and place a few logs / -~ ` , \ / and kindling in the fireplace /-~ ‘ . ` , \ ====================== / \ l Warming glowing flames perform l [ + ] [ + ] l l curling, swaying, and cracking l l l Pancakes and bacon l [ + ] l ` l the children yell as they run l [ + ] l `'`' l downstairs for breakfast [------- -----] `'`'`'`'`' l Mom asked with a smile, “Did you wash your hands “ -----‘ ` ‘ ` ‘ ` ‘------‘ ` ‘ ` ‘ ` ‘-----------‘ ` ‘ ` ‘ ` ‘ '''``` ''''''''''''' ' `'''```''' 11/29/2016 Children Story

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Date: 11/30/2016 7:41:00 AM
Wonderful write. Very impressive. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/30/2016 6:13:00 AM
That is some very impressive art work Eve. The poem was fun and brings back some memories to me from when I could smell the bacon as I woke and knew mom was in the kitchen cooking breakfast.
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Date: 11/30/2016 5:25:00 AM
Hmmm what a lovely poem it reminds me my childhood days! I love your act and the way you wrote this poem, moms are always the best and moms food are so delicious lol! Richard
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Date: 11/30/2016 4:05:00 AM
- A wonderful poem .... and a great shape Eve - You are creative and clever with this form! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2016 3:44:00 AM
Impressive! This is so well done Eve. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 11/29/2016 9:38:00 PM
Such beauty Eve...i'll be right over for a double stack
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/29/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Tim a stack waiting :-) Hugs Eve
Date: 11/29/2016 9:20:00 PM
I love pancakes! Yum yum! A very clever poem, Eve. It gave me a warm feeling inside.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/29/2016 10:36:00 PM
Thank you, Rick, I'm glad you enjoyed Hugs Eve
Date: 11/29/2016 8:31:00 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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