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I wander but some say I roam Travelling myriad mazes For home. When pillared pathways Lead to love cold I ascend the stairway stars That unfold From my miring mind Momentarily Dwelling where clouds hold my slumber And skies hold my dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/18/2009 5:31:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/16/2009 5:16:00 AM
Nice Lyric. Sara
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Date: 7/14/2009 1:55:00 PM
Jane, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/13/2009 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations dear Jane on your poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. More power and God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 7/12/2009 10:42:00 PM
. Wow, Great flow of rhymes, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
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Date: 7/7/2009 10:58:00 AM
What are we Jane without our dreams at times. I truly enjoyed reading this poem.Thank you for you kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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