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Moment With God

Throughout the sands of time, You have been known to communicate to us through omens, nature being Your most favorite tool. I have some papers; for each question, there is a paper. If it burns, I'll know it's a "Yes". If it doesn't, I'll know it's a "No". Please God, answer my wishes.... (A silent, continous pause for a while) Are there other beings in the universe, besides us humans? (The first paper burns) Do they know we exist? (The second paper burns) Do they worship You? (The third paper burns) Are they highly intelligent? (The fourth paper burns) Have they built temples for You? (The fifth paper doesnt burn) God, I'm confused. How can any sentient being worship you without a temple?! My ancestors prayed to You in well-built shrines..... God, I know this is not part of the questions; I'm hungry in curiosity....how do they worship you? (There was deep silence, which was dyed in serenity. I had found my answer.....) Date of Publishing: 13/10/2015

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Date: 10/22/2015 4:48:00 AM
Sat a few minutes after reading this adding questions of my own. Nice one Teddy and congratulations on your win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/27/2015 8:53:00 AM
Asante sana Grace! *^_^* Indeed there are times we feel like sitting down with God, and ask him all we want to know....
Date: 10/18/2015 4:43:00 PM
Teddy, Nice to see you on Silent One's winning list. Congratulations on your win. --SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/22/2015 12:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat! <3 *^_^*
Date: 10/17/2015 1:43:00 AM
Sometimes he answers in a still voice.. and it takes one looking inside not outside to hear that voice.. God is a spirit he communicates to the spirit you.. he is the calm before a storm.. the stillness before a major quake.. he is a presence descending down from the mountain in the form of mist.. shekinah glory.. shaka haina glorry
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 10/19/2015 1:25:00 AM
and congrats on the win bro
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2015 5:30:00 AM
Greetings bro. You have surely interpreted my work so well! ;-) Have a blessed weekend! ;-)
Date: 10/16/2015 2:00:00 AM
Deep thought provoking write Teddy! Congrats on awesome win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2015 5:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma! ;-)
Date: 10/16/2015 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations on a deep write, Teddy. Now, stop playing with matches :) . Regards, Viv
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/17/2015 5:26:00 AM
Hi Viv. Thank you for your applause! ;-) I'll sure stop playing with matches, hahaha..... ;-)
Date: 10/15/2015 7:23:00 PM
Teddy, congratulations on your winning write:-)Alexis
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/15/2015 11:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis! ;-)

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