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Moment of Truth

Like an epiphany in a clouded mind Lightening splits the sky after dusk Revealing hidden things- shrouded mysteries secrets no more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/6/2014 11:49:00 AM
You have a certain gift Sherese and your writing transports and reveals. This is the last thing you've written for a while. I hope you're well.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 4/23/2014 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Patricia. Same here.
Date: 1/22/2014 12:34:00 AM
Striking imagery you've created Sherese! The though of lightening on a clouded mind is terrifying - it can either destroy or build up. Well written!
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Date: 11/19/2013 12:33:00 PM
nice read... thks
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 4/23/2014 7:09:00 PM
Thanks, G.
Date: 11/12/2013 11:50:00 PM
a revelation moment!! Nice one.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 4/23/2014 7:10:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 11/12/2013 8:28:00 PM
I love that first line....wonderful write...love
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 4/23/2014 7:10:00 PM
Thanks Joseph.

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