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Moment of Silence

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Moment of Silence

A fallen embrace
The beautiful mute, never
Said they’d walk away

© Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 1:57:00 AM
    Ear-deafening silences(!) overwhelm while reading this Senruy of yours.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/26/2013 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I hope you can hear my thank you! =D
  1. Date: 8/13/2013 9:01:00 AM
    You had me intrigued with this write, Drake--so many possibilities about this-- and I really like your first line here-- 'fallen embrace'! Sending you soupmail in a bit!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/13/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks! I do appreciate that. :)
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 6:26:00 PM
    your point well and beautifully made

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/2/2013 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Victoria! Thank you so much! =)
  1. Date: 8/1/2013 6:12:00 AM
    I get that your saying that even when theirs silence you can still hear, all you have to do is litsen to yourself or maybe even trust yourself. Poet, excellent poem. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poetry I'm thankful.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/1/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yup, pretty much, Sean. :) Thanks so much!!
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 8:56:00 PM
    Captivating Drake!! Well done!! "A fallen embrace..." Gasping work! Thank you for your visit and kindness. I look forward to reading more of your work!! Hugs Deb

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/22/2013 9:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your words are so generous. Thank you so very much! I hope you do get to read more of my stuff. I will do the same for you, of course. :)
  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:22:00 AM
    Drake, not allowing the mind to escape when it comes to fallen thoughts. Sometimes silence is my best friend... I wish I had more of it, even when one does not agree. But, silence can always be a dangerous mute. Having others around can ease up the mood. Unless silence is all you need to make things go by. I call silence* best kind of communication.... Drake, I love the poet you are always expressing your words, in such good ways. always~ Linda

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/15/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I definitely understand. I certainly don't disagree with you either. To me, though, silence has its time & place. Thank you so much for your thoughts on this. :)
  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:41:00 AM
    Very captivating....

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/15/2013 8:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    (Blush) Thank you!!! :) I do what I can.
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Impressive!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/10/2013 10:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much! :)
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 4:46:00 PM
    Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/5/2013 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks! :)
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Wow...this gave me the chills...beautiful mute..nothing needed to be spoken. Thank you for your comment on my poem and finding me..xxoo Holly Moore

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/5/2013 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & my pleasure!! You have great stuff. I'm grateful you were able to stop by! :)
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 4:42:00 AM
    Sometimes no words need to be uttered..lovely senryu.I hppe you re doing fine .its been long and im glad..very glad to read your masterpieces again.Btw tnks for your comments on my humble scribbles

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/5/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well said and I wholly agree. I'm doing quite good. Making things happen here. :) Your words are WAY too kind. And you're very welcome! I will continue to do so. :)
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 8:30:00 PM
    well, it's so great to see YOUR work again too, Drake!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/4/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you!!!!! :)
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 1:05:00 PM
    Love the message..Lucilla took my words. :) Excellent take on Senryu Strong message indeed.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/4/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you kindly for your thoughts on this. I did what I could. :)
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Drake; This is good. Sometimes - words are not needed. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem. Many blessings. Lucilla

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/4/2013 12:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Agreed. Well said. Thank you so much! :)
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Well now, it took your hello to lure me back ;) how are you? I just love this one Drake, that unique way you have of bringing your message across! Brilliant stuff, once again ;)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/4/2013 11:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there! :) Ah, the power of Hello! I've been making life happen one day at a time, it's been quite good. It's been wonderful to read your work again. I'm glad to be back. And, as always, thank you for your very kind words.