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When my mind alit (when the world was still) upon curvatures of breath and silence and a glance's grace When my mouth paused (the world was dark) on synonyms for devotion eyes rested, trouble was vanquished then and one sad soul slept

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/20/2008 3:04:00 AM
Hey there, long time no see, my friend! Thank you for entering this amazing poem in my contest and congrats on third place. This peice was moving, mind-bending and enlightening, you are a shining star, as always, love and miss you! Kristin
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Date: 9/17/2008 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations Tracy on your win in Kristin's contest! Extremely well deserved. Your poetry is always exceptional. Love, Shar
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