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Let the light shine bright on thee tonight of the times I remember as a child you never said much but your actions spoke in the tradition of all ltalian folk creating your meals with a classic flair of pasta and soups with delicate care your solemn look of holding back pain but always a smile when the dinner came as a child in Salerno, you dreamed of life of writing words but it wasn’t to be In the new world, America, you finally wed to Joe, your amore then little ones came quickly then slowly and then there were six and of the six begat twelve extending the line to races and creeds for your children you were always there in your final days we were left to compare your legacy of love to all your family and friends until the end Dedicated to my mother Maria Vincenza (Ardovino) Sergi Contest

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Date: 7/24/2016 5:19:00 PM
At last. I think this is one of yours I have not seen yet. This is fantastic. So nice to know you grew up with such a loving mom, and a good cook. Pasta. YUM
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/25/2016 9:14:00 AM
Hi Andrea: Thank you; she was a great mom. She taught my Colombian wife how to cook Italian style.
Date: 11/9/2015 9:17:00 AM
"your solemn look of holding back pain but always a smile when the dinner came" "for your children you were always there in your final days we were left to compare your legacy of love" love these two stanzas so much..moms are always the best! ~ I am indebted to THAT WOMB forever and beyond~ thank you Ralph for letting me read this wonderful poem.. love and peace to your mom :) :* ~7~
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/9/2015 1:03:00 PM
hi Remnan: thank you for reading it.
Date: 5/14/2014 5:59:00 PM
That was so beautiful, brought tears to my eyes...I really loved it. Your mother was a good women :) Ana
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Date: 4/8/2014 1:27:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute, to your mom. She will be smiling from heaven. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 3/21/2014 7:53:00 AM
A touching heartfelt dedication. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/20/2014 12:12:00 PM
Ralph, congratulations on your win in the poem for mommy contest... Verlena
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 3/20/2014 12:18:00 PM
Hi Veriena, nice to know you. Thank you for your comments on Mom and Laughter You have a lovely name and I look forward to reading your poems.
Date: 3/20/2014 12:01:00 PM
Beautifully written Ralph... Verlena
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Date: 3/20/2014 5:55:00 AM
Lovely and heartfelt poem on mommy. Congrats on the fine win, ralph
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Date: 3/19/2014 5:34:00 PM
Ralph, A tender loving write... :) Congratulations, with your winning poem, --A very touching topic, sponsored by the Awesome and Sweet Leonora-- Sending hugs ~LINDA
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 3/20/2014 12:22:00 PM
Thank you , Linda I'm honored to be appreciated by you
Date: 3/19/2014 2:21:00 PM
A beautiful poem...a tribute to a loving mum. Congrats on your win. [ somehow I've been associating your surname to Italy...] We Maltese are often in contact with Italians, being so close neighbours.]
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:49:00 AM
This is a great poem for your mom my dear friend Ralph. Congratulations! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support in my contest! Love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/17/2014 1:21:00 PM
a great tribute for your mom!!!...She surely was a wonderful woman... all moms are incomparable..they must be loved and respected... tHaNk you for a comment on my poem... you're a great poet!! ^__^
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Date: 3/16/2014 8:36:00 AM
Hi Seosamh: I just entered a contest but I must confess, it's an old poem.
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Date: 3/15/2014 8:32:00 PM
Beautiful. How appropriate with Mothers day approaching, (in Ireland). A wonderful write capturing such detail with precision. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 3/15/2014 8:51:00 AM
Hi Demetrios: Thank you very much. Although she came from humble origins, she was a great Lady and well respected. I miss her.
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Date: 3/14/2014 7:31:00 PM
Caro Ralph, no poem, no matter how beautiful it may be could ever be able to capture the greatness of mother, this sublime being that precedes our own! I understand you and bow before your mother! Fantastico!
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Date: 3/14/2014 4:46:00 PM
how graciously scribed is this. sergi... a mother's love is like no other and you captured her essence so well!...bellisimo!.. hugs
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