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Molting

Ostracized again Just as my wings began to mend…. Feathers blow in wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/22/2010 9:29:00 AM
love it
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:27:00 AM
What a wonderful senryu with nice images
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:56:00 AM
Many people will see this as the story of their lives, Robb. Excellent senryu! Also wanted to applaud you for your comments on Chris's blog. I'm afraid Diane is going to leave now. She is new and does not understand the personality issues that come into play here. Thanks for offering a better perspective for her to consider. Love, Carolyn
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