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Misty Morning

Sunlight shining through the clouds To warm this dreary day Taste of the misting rain upon my lips Daffodils like gold begin to sway I feel the breeze blow through my hair And smell the morning dew The only thing that is missing Is me having you I walk along this narrow path The trees beginning to bud Hoping that I can find you As my shoes slosh in the mud The tulips red like fire Set my soul ablaze As I continue searching Afraid I’ve lost my way Calling out your name A bird returns my call It makes me really sad to think I’m alone after all *For Five Senses/ Five Elements contest Sunlight shining (seeing) Daffodils like gold (metal) Misting rain on my lips (tasting) Sunlight shining (fire) Smell the morning dew (smelling) Misting rain (water) Bird returns my call (hearing) Trees beginning to bud (earth) Rain upon my lips (touching) Breeze blow through my hair (wind/ air)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/10/2009 4:59:00 AM
Remember through the Lord we are never alone....Even tho inside we are half the time no matter who we have around..Blessings
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Date: 3/13/2009 9:38:00 PM
very beautifully penned from the heart I wish you well in the contest ,,looks like a winner to me,,and Thank you for your kind words upon my poem,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/11/2009 6:32:00 AM
Lolita, this is truly awesome! Sad, but so beautifully written. Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/11/2009 4:43:00 AM
A lovely poem though it's sad. The beauty of your words creates wonderful imagery, but the loneliness exists, doesn't it? Very well written. Michael
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Date: 3/11/2009 1:54:00 AM
What a sensory write, well done and good luck! Kristin
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Date: 3/11/2009 1:33:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/10/2009 11:17:00 PM
well done! a very creative writing there.. loved the line 'Taste of the misting rain upon my lips'... really clever! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/10/2009 10:26:00 PM
Great use of imagery Lolita and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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