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Mistake

When I'm in pain, I think of your name You were always there when I needed you To make me fall in love was your aim Then you disappeared just out of the blue You just left me without any warning The sunset came, everything was hidden I wake up all alone, desiring I asked why everything was unwritten I tried to pick up the pieces of me But I realized I can not do this Without you, I feel drowning in the sea Now all that I can do is reminisce Loving you was a mistake, a great mistake No one will make me feel this, no one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/23/2016 10:12:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Jaimie... LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 6:11:00 PM
nice to read this one again, Jaimie....SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2015 1:20:00 AM
Jaimie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/11/2015 11:29:00 PM
Jaimie Salvador:), this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2015 4:12:00 PM
- With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Jaimie :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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