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Mist of Night Wafts--Lune

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from mist-clad tassels immaculate leaves of night waft bearing frosty scent Andrea Dietrich's Pretty Little Lunes Contest 8/6/2015 Collom Lune # 6

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Thomas Martin

Date: 8/19/2015 2:58:00 PM

Do not usually comment on near haiku writing here but this one is wonderful!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/16/2015 11:02:00 PM

Perfect depict of the pic nette! Congrats on a wonderful win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/16/2015 10:21:00 PM

A unique rendering of the photo! Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2015 8:43:00 PM

A sweet win Nette... LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 1:29:00 AM

Nette, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love

Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2015 7:58:00 PM

Lovely write Nette...Congrats on your win

Abdul Malik

Date: 8/15/2015 9:29:00 AM

It tempts me to take a dip in the frosty lake! Nice.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2015 7:27:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/15/2015 7:13:00 AM

Grats on your win with this beautiful frosty write :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/15/2015 5:59:00 AM

An appealing sensual take on an inspiring visual, Nette. Beautiful! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win:) Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2015 1:01:00 AM

Nette, not many chose this picture. What I liked best that you did was the way you used alliteration.All those T sounds were so CRISP to go with that FROSTY scent! Each line sang with beauty! Congrats in my contest.

Constance La France

Date: 8/6/2015 12:58:00 PM

Nette, so very beautiful for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, but she .. I am looking forward to the ending too

Leon Datu

Date: 8/6/2015 12:58:00 PM

Great use of metaphors. A tasseled view of trees scenting a cold night is a wonder. i revel at your poetry!

Leon Datu
Date: 8/6/2015 12:59:00 PM

make it 7 +

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2015 11:46:00 AM

- Really wonderful !!!! - I wish you luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lyva Marty

Date: 8/6/2015 12:48:00 AM

This glorious poem stirs and heightens the senses, opens the eyes to the natural sounds and beauty of a view.

Gabby Sabre

Date: 8/6/2015 12:18:00 AM

Elegant, beautiful setting and poem! The colorful imagery gives the reader a taste of the scene.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/5/2015 3:41:00 PM

The imagery is sublime Nette - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Carly Lalion

Date: 8/5/2015 3:01:00 PM

Exquisite picture upon which misty, crystal-clear thoughts take flight I admire your art!