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Mist and Blaze

Mist and Blaze Mirror and my face Down in sorrow a fraction of me A ice burning tea . In a Place of flakes of fake judgemental parade I can't just sit and laugh in grace In this crazy maze Not my sensitive blaze .. The defeatist mist Please don't say that to my face I will probably see it as a pessimist I'm a optimist Grabbing me by the wrist the trust mist My sensitive blaze The panic raise The undefined gaze The confused days The stare phase. Overthink In a enamoured blink Click. Flick. Im fine . One worry shrink Imperceptible nod Thw blazes and mists reciprocate A Rest ... For a minute

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Date: 12/22/2016 5:08:00 PM
What a masterpiece! Well written, Rosalia.
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Date: 12/23/2016 2:37:00 PM
Thank you for commenting I appreciate feedback , I tried to make this poem slightly symbolic so I'm glad you liked it :)

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